This is a photo I took on my IPad in 8th grade. Although I enjoy my original composition for this photo, there are many areas where it falls flat. For example, you can see clearly how zoomed in my camera was to take this picture. The whole picture is now unappealing to me. The sharpness is too much and the picture just looks really messy. Maybe if I didn't zoom in so much, then it could have been much better.
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I took this photo of my sister on our promotion day. I like this picture however, it could have been way better. First of all the lighting in this picture is too bright. It is so bright that your eye is not drawn to her smiling face, rather her white dress. There is also a lot of space to the left of her. I could have made this picture better by cropping it, and maybe checking my brightness before I took this photo.
This photo was taken by me while I was in Peru. I enjoy the concept that I intentionally had for this photo. The angle is good and I captured the butterfly as the main focus. Other than the things right with this picture there are a few things wrong with it. For example, this photo is a bit blurry, or fuzzy, so the focus is not that good. In addition you can see a screw on the side of the window, where the picture was taken.
I really enjoy this photo that my grandma took. I like how the color of the flowers are bright and stand out. However there are a few things that would have made this photo better. The main focus of this photo are the flowers. But the focus on them is blurry. This causes the focus to drift away from the flowers. Ultimately you end up being drawn to the soil, or the plant in the background, meaning the composition could have been improved as well.
This photo is a picture I took of my Grandparents watching the sunset in Imperial Beach, I really enjoy this photo that I took of them. I mostly like how the sun is reflecting off the water, it gives it a nice look. Their poses are also very nice in this image. The hugging pose brings a warm feeling to the photo, that the sun also provides.
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